Tuesday, January 17, 2012

All Star Mentor



I think that Layla's post called "Taking the Easy Way Out" really exemplifies what we have been working on because it is organized with purposeful paragraphs. She starts by talking about the world and how our world always seems to take the easiest rout. Then she talks about the book using as little retell as possible, then talks about herself then about the world again. The way she uses paragraphs keeps you intrigued and at the end everything feels summed up. Like I said before, she doesn't retell, she just gives information relevant to what she is speaking about. Overall, in all her posts she writes beautifully and really gets you interested in the book, topic and if you disagree you will want to fight back.

So I think that Layla's posts are definitely worth reading. Thought provoking. Show effort. Organized. Beautiful.


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